发布时间:2025-07-30
在雅思写作中,词汇的丰富性和多样性直接影响Lexical Resource(词汇丰富度)评分。许多考生因高频重复简单词汇,导致作文陷入“词汇贫瘠”陷阱。本文将为大家介绍雅思高频重复词汇场景。
一、为什么词汇重复会扣分?
雅思官方评分标准明确要求考生“灵活使用多样化的词汇表达”,重复使用同一单词会向考官传递两个负面信号:
1. 词汇量不足:无法用更精准、更学术的表达替换基础词汇;
2. 语言僵化:缺乏对语境和逻辑的掌控力,过度依赖固定词汇。
例如:连续使用“important”描述重要性(如“Education is important for society. Government policies are important…”),会让文章显得机械且缺乏说服力。
二、高频重复场景及替换方案
1. 通用形容词替换
Problem词汇:important, good, bad, many
解决策略:
重要:crucial, vital, significant, indispensable
好:beneficial, advantageous, remarkable, superior
坏:detrimental, harmful, adverse, problematic
多:numerous, a multitude of, a plethora of, substantial
例句升级
原句:Technology has many benefits.
替换:Technology offers a multitude of advantages.
2. 动词替换:避免“ 动词”依赖
Problem词汇:make, do, get, have
解决策略:根据具体语境选择精准动词
make progress → achieve, attain, accomplish
do research → conduct, undertake, carry out
get information → obtain, acquire, retrieve
例句升级
原句:Students should get more knowledge.
替换:Students need to acquire a broader range of knowledge.
3. 抽象概念替换:善用“词性转换”
对于高频抽象词(如“development”“change”),可通过改变词性或使用短语避免重复:
development → advancement, progress, evolution(名词);developing, expanding(动词)
change → transformation, modification(名词);alter, adjust(动词)
例句升级
原句:The development of technology leads to social change.
替换:Technological advancement drives societal transformation.
三、高阶技巧:从“词汇替换”到“逻辑衔接
单纯的同义替换可能割裂句间逻辑,需结合连接词和上下文强化关联性:
原句重复:Environmental protection is important. It is important to reduce pollution.
初级替换:Environmental protection is crucial. It is vital to reduce pollution.
高阶升级:Environmental protection is crucial; moreover, reducing pollution plays a pivotal role in sustaining ecosystems.
关键点:用连接词(moreover, consequently)或短语(play a role in, contribute to)串联上下文,提升整体流畅度。
四、避坑指南:这些雷区千万别踩!
1. 避免过度生僻词:例如用“sycophantic”代替“flattering”,可能因语境不当扣分;
2. 勿强行替换专有名词:如“carbon dioxide”不能替换为“CO₂”(需保持原文缩写一致);
3. 确保语法正确性:替换时注意词性搭配(如“have an impact on”不可改为“make an impact on”)。
实战演练:升级你的句子
原句(重复使用problem):
Air pollution is a problem in cities. Traffic congestion is another problem that needs attention.
升级版:
Air pollution poses a significant challenge in urban areas. Additionally, traffic congestion has emerged as a pressing issue requiring urgent solutions.
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